Friday, 19 June 2015

My Spelling Graph



I think I should work on my spelling at  home because i am not getting ten out of ten every week.

Friday, 12 June 2015

Personal Presentation Award



I got this certificate for looking neat and wearing the correct uniform.

Salt Strategy




Spelling Graph Reflection

I am learning to learn how to spell new words and to use them in my writing.
I am so proud of being able to use the S.A.L.T Spelling strategy to help me to learn how to spell my words.
It can be tricky to spell long words.
My buddy can help me to learn how to spell the hard words.
The next step for me in my learning might be to try to learn harder words.


Thursday, 11 June 2015

The End Of The Path

                      The End of the Path
It’s the 25th of April 1915 .  It's pitch black.  We are under the cover of darkness.  It's just before 3am.  I'm crammed in a landing boat with thirty nine other nervous soldiers. We were wild with fear and excitement.  


I was sweating like a waterfall.  All I could hear was the rough waves pushing against my boat.  I could feel  the smooth wind  swirling on my skin. My heart was pounding.  I could not move because I was shaking like a washing machine.  Was I going to die?


Suddenly the moon dipped behind the grey clouds.  Minutes later my boat  stopped on the sandy beach.  Then a big loud boom came from one of the steamboats.  Bullets were flying everywhere.  I didn't know what was happening so I ducked down crying  and praying to God that I want to be  safe  and that I want to go back to New Zealand .  I could smell everyone's fear.


This is HELL!!!!...  Was this the end of my path.


Reflection
I am learning to write a proper recount
What I found tricky was to put capital letters and full stops and other punctuation.
What I found easy was to get ideas and better words
This helped me to write a better recount


Thursday, 4 June 2015

The Great Divider



The Great Divider

I am learning to recognise the effect of dividing numbers by ten and then by ten again.
I am so proud of being able to divide by 10 and 100.
It can be tricky to multiply decimals.
My Teacher could help me with my learning.