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Monday, 24 November 2014
Narrative story
2 comments:
Anonymous
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This is a creative story Julius. I like your ideas. Dont forget to revise and edit your writing. This is an important part of producing great writing. You are missing crucial parts, like paragraphs and language features like similes.
2 comments:
This is a creative story Julius. I like your ideas. Dont forget to revise and edit your writing. This is an important part of producing great writing. You are missing crucial parts, like paragraphs and language features like similes.
Great job Julius great story it is so funny and I like the you were so descriptive.Awesome Work!!
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